Just Another Poem

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by crazy_cat (Just a crazy cat) on Thursday, 22-Jan-2009 1:22:25

I’m hurt
You’re mad
You’re upset
And I’m sad
Where did the love go
That’s what I want to know
You’re not the person I once knew
Is there anything left that is true
Because you’re doing things
That you swore you would never do
Is there anything left that isn’t a lie
As you look at me straight in the eye
Mirror mirror on the wall
Is there any point at all
To this life I must live
While there is so little to give
I gave you everything
And never really asked for anything
Entrusted you with my heart and soul
But now it’s all turned to ash and coal
Is there any beauty left in me
That is what I’m trying so hard to see
But it’s over and you’re gone
I guess somehow we got it all wrong
But then again to fix it
Would it even be worth it
Or would it just go back to be
All the things I don’t like about me

Post 2 by cumbiambera2005 (i just keep on posting!) on Thursday, 22-Jan-2009 1:36:39

Cool! I like it!

Post 3 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Thursday, 22-Jan-2009 22:28:32

It's an all right piece. So down.

Post 4 by missdanceralicia (Zone BBS Addict) on Saturday, 24-Jan-2009 0:11:23

i like the poem :-)

Post 5 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 24-Jan-2009 13:53:02

Nice! I know what you mean, I've felt like that. And yes, there's still beauty in you. I know that because if there wasn't, God wouldn't have created you. *Smiles.